摂食障がいの克服317【英検1級と過食症】

　こんばんは。

　昨夜から今朝に掛けて12時間眠りました。
　やはり休みだからと言って何もしないと圧倒的によくないと気付いて英作文をしていました。3時間半で6つ書きました。

　英検1級の200単語～250単語で3つの理由を元に論述する課題です。

　賛成か反対か：　
　＊再生可能なエネルギー
　＊遺伝子工学に政府は投資をすべきか
　＊世界は平和に向かっているか
　＊選挙の電子投票
　＊海外のアウトソーシングは経済発展に繋がるか
　＊旅行業界を推奨すること

　200単語～250単語で論述するもので、6議題に対して、今日は3時間半で書き切った、という感じでした。

　例えば、私の英文です。

　がんばって書いてみたので張り付けていますけれど、
　さらっと最後までとばしてください。

　Though it would not go very smoothly, I believe renewable energy needs to be promoted. This is due to the issue of global warming, the concern of public health, and the fact that the traditional energy is a finite source.
Firstly, the current energy of major use is generated by burning fossil fuels. This causes emission of CO2, which has been the very cause of global warming. The rise of the sea levels threatens lives of sea creatures and some lands have been even facing of disappearance in the near future. It would play a crucial role if we stopped using the traditional energy in order to save the earth.
Secondly, discovery of the sources for the current use of energy itself is not eco-friendly. Drilling coals or gas itself is actually harmful to humans. The neighboring areas result in having heavily polluted water, which has been all the time vital for local citizens.
Finally, the fact that the sources in the current use are finite is the reason for humans to avoid finding other resources. Energy such as solar and wind can last almost forever and thus, we can depend on them over and over again.
Though there would be some ways to go until it gets on the rails, I believe renewable energy needs to be dominant instead of the traditional energy as I described above.

 　遺伝子工学の分野です。

　I believe that governments should spend no more money on genetic engineering technology. This is due to the major responsibilities of governments, profits of private corporation, and ethical points of dilemma.
Firstly, one of the most significant roles government plays is how to utilize its budgets effectively after collecting its sources from taxpayers. Governments should more concentrate on issues to be solved in all haste. Moreover, this area of genetic technology is associated in some ways with food production and medical and health fields. Governments should invest more on these basic areas to support the area in a wide meaning.
Secondly, private corporations need to keep healthy operations. The more they success in investigation of new technology, the more profits they approach. Thus, the new fields such as genetic engineering is ideal for these private corporation to pursuit.
Finally, genetic engineering is so new field that there is always ethical dilemma. One of the main goals in this area is to make better plants, animals, or even humans by recombining genes. This certainly has an aspect of ignoring the nature. Consequently, the issue is likely to remain controversial, and opponents never diminish.
I believe genetic technology should be supported by governments, in the view of the effective use of budgets, its characteristics which should be more concentrated on by private corporations, and remaining ethical issues to its area.

　ちなみに、このテキストにおいて7月ぐらいから3つの書くべき要点は事前に学んでおいて自分のことばで書いています（無論暗記出来たらいいけれど、全く覚えられないので自分の言葉で書いています）。

　昨日今日で書いた際には3つの要点は繰り返し事前に叩き込んでもいたけれど、それを実際に自分で英文にするとなると非常に難しかった。

　（このような感じで10個昨日～今日に書いたのですが、無論スペルミスや文法ミスもあると思います。最後のほうでは、冒頭だけ模範解答を確認してみたりもした）

 　読み返してみてもまだまだですね。こういう英作文を昨日から今日にかけて10個書いてみた。

　英作文の後にしたことは少しの家事になりますが…。

　日中にしたポジティブなこと：

　英作文
　水回りの掃除
　冷凍庫の整理

　悩んでいること：努力すればするほどに、過食欲が近づいてくる。

　読んで頂いてありがとうございます。