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Whoâs the intended audience youâre looking at?
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What are you trying to achieve from your feedback?
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What was memorable/What resonated
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The overall layout is clean and looks easy to navigate. Great Job!
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We have developed the brand guide and design system to allow the team to design more efficiently and consistently. Take a look at them. That should help make things feel more cohesive.
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Whatâs missing / What didnât work?
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It took me a while to notice the call to action. Buttons should be more prominent to add more immediate recognisability. It might help users to more quickly find what theyâre looking for.
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I feel like thereâs something that doesnât feel right about this part, have you tried looking at the proximity of each set of elements and regrouping them?
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The button styles donât quite align with the design system youâre using. Please make sure that the button sizes we use across devices are consistent.
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It looks like you may be overusing your primary action colour. Youâre using it here, here and here which could detract from your intended workflow. Iâd try reworking that aspect.
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Iâd love to make this CTA button more visible on the page.
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It depends on who is your target audience is but the colours might be a bit muted. A brighter colour scheme might appeal to them and be more on brand.
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Using warm tone will make our users feel familiar and safe
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The placement of social media icons is confusing to me.
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Iâm worried that people wonât be able to distinguish between text and links
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I would like to put more emphasis on this.
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Right now Iâm having a little hard time focusing on this section, I think it needs more emphasis.
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Iâm not sure the photos you used are going to work.
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Make the logo 50% bigger
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As a new company with little brand recognition, we need to make sure potential customers become familiar with our brand as much as our products.
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What can we do to make our branding stand out more?
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Will the tone of your piece create maximum impact with your intended audience?
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Iâm used to seeing websites with the menu at the top of the page. Is there a reason you chose to put it on the left?
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Iâm used to seeing them in the footer. Is this the best place for them?
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The font seems playful, but our audience is middle-aged and mature. Do you think it's the best choice?
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Basically, if you lead with something nice and end with something nice, then in the middle, you can say the criticism or basically anything you want.
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Compliment Sandwichã®äŸ1
Praise: âThe overall layout is clean and looks easy to navigate. Great Job!â
Criticism: âHowever, the button styles donât quite align with the design system we're using. We have developed the brand guide and design system to allow the team to design more efficiently and consistently. Take a look at them. That should help make things feel more cohesive.
Praise: âI appreciate your hard work. I can't believe you have finished this in such a short amount of time. Keep up the good work.â
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Praise: âNice colour choice on the links. They really draw attention to the primary calls to actionâ
Criticism: âHowever Iâm concerned there are too many competing actions here. We donât want to overwhelm customers with choice. Can you think of a way to narrow this down to a single primary action?â
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Team Collaboration, CommunicationâšIâve really enjoyed working with you. You have a great positive attitude.
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You also gave me some constructive feedback too, which I really appreciated.
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âšYou understood and built skills for the concept of working smarter and faster, and develop the mindset to be more effective in a fast-changing workplace.
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For example, using Figma for PJM Project: We were both sharing unfinished work which means we trusted each other - there was no ego.
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I also noticed that you are innovative and creative and not scared of infusing more bold ideas.
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You developed a better understanding of the importance of component libraries and maintained good strategies for organising and labelling components and content.
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âšIt was so amazing to see you creating characters for PJM Project. Your illustration skill is exceptional.
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