Day 30. What surprised you the most today?

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」（アルク刊）Q.030
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I was surprised by my health condition in the morning today. When I got off from the bed, I felt dizzy and the blood didn’t go to my brain. I don’t usually experience these, so I was astonished by myself the most today. I drank Lipovitan D to get my condition better and actually I got better after two hours later. I apreciate the  helpful drink and I can get it every convinience store, that means we can buy anywhere. That makes me love Japan more and more.

Original Word Count: 123

Corrected version

1. Natural Version
I was surprised by my health condition this morning. When I got out of bed, I felt dizzy, and it seemed like the blood wasn’t reaching my brain properly. I usually don’t experience anything like this, so it really shocked me. To recover, I drank a bottle of Lipovitan D, and thankfully, I started feeling better about two hours later. I’m grateful for that helpful drink, which is so easy to find at any convenience store in Japan. Being able to buy something so reliable and effective anywhere makes me appreciate living in Japan even more.

Revised Word Count: 112

2. Casual Version
This morning, I was surprised by how bad I felt. When I got out of bed, I felt super dizzy, like the blood wasn’t going to my brain properly. It’s not something I usually deal with, so it really caught me off guard. To fix it, I had a Lipovitan D, and luckily, I felt a lot better after about two hours. I’m so thankful for that drink! You can grab it at any convenience store in Japan, which is super convenient. It’s one of the reasons I love Japan—simple things like that make life so much easier.

Revised Word Count: 112