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2024年10月8日inherent incapable

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Time: 2024年10月8日 20:27


What do I think I should die tonight or not, and why.

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what did i do today. there is nothing. I cannot do anaything. I don’t like it. If I rearize and recognize the fact that do something earlier, could I pass all obstacles? I don’t know. I hate them. True desire. What is my true dream. what is my desire condition of today. As more book i read, more thing I know, more miserable I feel. These will not come back never again. Once it passed away, it will not come again to me. What do you think about the meaning of your life I know that there is no natural meanning in the life. So you need to make some meaning and put it on your life. Just do it. I hate my self. JUst do them. I watched the livestreaming on nobel prize, and there are alot of genius and successful people on the screeen. I don't like me. However, I don't mind such things anymore cuz there is not time to waste from now. I don’t have such energy to do somtheing for my own future. So i dont see the future. Just do something now with enthusiasm. Driven by enthusiasm is my only power to move on. calm down and move forward to death. Don't forget the death will come to you soon.


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The original text contains 204 words. Here's the rewritten version with improved grammar and vocabulary:


What did I accomplish today? Nothing. I feel incapable of doing anything. I don’t like it. If I had realized and recognized the need to act earlier, could I have overcome all these obstacles? I’m not sure. I dislike everything**. True desire—what is it?** What is my true dream? What is my desired state today? The more books I read, the more I learn, but the more miserable I feel. These moments will never return. Once they're gone, they’re lost to me forever.

What do you think is the meaning of life? I understand that life has no inherent meaning. You need to create meaning and apply it to your life. Just do it. I hate myself. Just take action. I watched the Nobel Prize livestream and saw so many geniuses and successful people on the screen. I dislike myself. But I no longer care about such things because I have no time to waste. I don’t have the energy to invest in my own future, so I don't see one. I just focus on doing something now with enthusiasm. Enthusiasm is my only source of strength to keep going. Stay calm and move forward, knowing that death is coming. Don't forget—death will arrive soon.

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