英検1級　二次試験対策⑨　2月17日

問題：Is the internet making people vulnerable?

イントロ

Although the young people are the great internet users,
I think that the internet is making them weaker in some ways.
I have some reasons to support my opinion.

ボディ１

The first reason is that they are sometimes afraid of experience.
Many people are addicted to social media, and they always search for the information they need before they do something or if they know it is not beneficial, they just give up.
But I always feel like they just need to do it before googling it. Even if it is not good experience, you can learn from them. They are too dependent on the knowledge they get through internet before experiencing it.

ボディ2

The second reason is that it’s difficult for them to keep their privacy.
Not to mention, social media like Instagram and Tik Tok is getting popular.
They put every single thing in their life on their posts
Moreover, recently, the app called Zenly was popular among them.
The app is going to tell you where your friends or partner all the time and if you reject to be a part of it or reject to install it, you will get bullied because it means that you betray them.
It is a serious problem for young people.

結論

Although the internet is making our life more convenient, I strongly believe that it also has bad influence on young people.

質問

・Do Japanese companies need to cooperate more with their foreign competitors?

I think so.
Japan is known for its technology but the latest technology like electric cars and AI, I feel like Japan has been left behind.
The competition in the market will be intense in next decades so we need more cooperation with the companies and need to update the latest technology.
 
 

・Has the modern life style harmed people’s health?

 
I don’t think so.
Many people are going to gyms we can get much information
from the internet.
If you have unhealthy life style , it means you are just lazy or you just chose to be unhealthy.
 

・How has modern technology affected young people in good ways?

There are many ways.
For example, even if you are in the rural area, you can get as good education as in the city.
So, for the hardworking students it’s much easier to learn. Same as other technologies.
If you use it properly, it will do good. But you cannot be too reliant on that.

・良かった点

　
・アイデアは結構すぐ浮かんだ。
・とにかく黙らへんようにしようとできたのは良かった。

・改善点

　
 
・質問の答えになってない時あるから注意したい
・一個目のアイデアが浮かんだのはいいけど、もっと具体例を詰めるべきやった。