英作文8日目

Theme:Bad habits

Let me explain about my bad habits.
Do you have some bad habits? I have several bad habits I think.
For example, I want to avoid using smartphones before going to bed.
Do you usually check your phone just before sleeping? I usually do so.
To increase the quality of my sleeping, I want to improve this habit.
As for another habit, learning English is my habit too, and I feel this is good habit. But recently, I have been considering whether learning English is high priority thing for me. I’m sure it is very important for me. But I’m not sure it is the most important thing for me. Since we have limited time, I should decide the priority of what I want do.

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Sure, here is a revised version of your text:

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Let me explain my bad habits. Do you have any bad habits? I think I have several.

For example, I want to avoid using my smartphone before going to bed. Do you usually check your phone just before sleeping? I usually do. To improve the quality of my sleep, I want to change this habit.

Another habit of mine is learning English, which I feel is a good habit. However, I have recently been considering whether learning English should be my highest priority. I’m sure it is very important for me, but I’m not sure it is the most important thing. Since time is limited, I need to prioritize what I want to do.

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This revision improves clarity and flow, and it corrects some minor errors.