Day 23. What is your theme song?

11/11/2024
What is your theme song?

My theme song is “One day more” from the musical called Les Miserable. When I was in university, I played one of the role of that musical in English Drama Club. This song resonated with the audience and empower the people on the stage. It expresses the personality of each characters and reflect their complex feelings so that they sing anxiously, passionatly and so on. The last part of it, the ensemble finale is beautiful and it is inspirering and empowerring our mind. The lyrics makes me get the power to do the best for tomorrow.

Original Word Count: 108

Corrected Version

1. Natural Version
My theme song is “One Day More” from the musical Les Misérables. When I was in university, I played one of the roles from that musical in my English Drama Club. This song resonated with the audience and inspired everyone on stage. It captures each character’s personality and complex emotions, so they sing with anxiety, passion, and hope. The ensemble finale at the end is beautiful, inspiring, and uplifting. The lyrics give me the strength to push myself to do my best for tomorrow, and I feel empowered each time I listen to it.

Revised Word Count: 113

2. Casual Version
My theme song is “One Day More” from the musical Les Misérables. Back in university, I got to play one of the roles in this show with my English Drama Club. This song really connected with the audience and gave energy to everyone on stage. It shows each character’s personality and emotions, like anxiety, passion, and hope. The final part, with everyone singing together, is so inspiring. The lyrics always give me the strength to do my best for tomorrow and help me feel ready to face anything.

Revised Word Count: 106