Day 85. Hard to keep going

It is easy to make plans and decide what I should do. It is also kind of fun and gets myself satisfied. But it’s so hard to keep it going. I’ve had that tendency since I was in high school. I feel like I've never been able to act as planned.

Revised Versions

Natural Version (100+ Words)

I find it easy to make plans and decide what I should do. Planning is also kind of fun and gives me a sense of satisfaction. However, it’s really hard to keep those plans going consistently. I’ve struggled with this tendency since high school. It feels like I’ve never been able to follow through with what I’ve planned. Despite enjoying the process of making plans, the execution part remains a challenge for me. I often start strong with enthusiasm, but maintaining that momentum over time is something I continually work on. I hope to develop better strategies to turn my plans into actions in the future.

Casual Version (100+ Words)

I find making plans and deciding what I should do pretty easy. It’s kind of fun and makes me feel good about myself. But sticking to those plans is really tough. I’ve had this issue since high school and it feels like I’ve never been able to follow through with my plans. Even though I enjoy planning and getting satisfied from it, actually keeping those plans going is a constant struggle. I usually start off with a lot of enthusiasm, but maintaining that energy over time is hard for me. I’m trying to find better ways to turn my plans into reality and stay on track.

Word Counts
• Original: 67
• Natural Version: 131
• Casual Version: 126

Score (original): 6.5/10

Summary: Your original writing clearly expressed your challenges with maintaining plans, but it had some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The revised versions enhance clarity, expand on your experiences, and improve the overall flow while keeping your original message intact.

Additional Tips:
1. Expand Your Thoughts: Adding more details about why it’s hard to stick to plans can make your writing more engaging.
2. Consistent Tenses: Ensure that verb tenses remain consistent to maintain clarity.
3. Use Connectors: Words like “however,” “despite,” and “although” can help in smoothly transitioning between ideas.
4. Proofread for Grammar and Spelling: Double-check for any grammatical errors or typos to enhance readability.
5. Express Emotions Clearly: Sharing more about how you feel regarding your struggles can add depth to your writing.

Keep practicing, and your ability to articulate your thoughts will continue to improve!