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Day 37. Do you ever take a nap?

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」(アルク刊)Q.037
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I don’t take it usually. But I do that sometimes after having a lunch or going to a gym in weekends, not working time. Sleeping is my essential point in my life because if I don’t have enough time to sleep in the night, my productivity would be really down compared to other people. So I take a enough sleeping time in weekdays. I think it leads not to taking a nap in the day. But, we should take a nap because it gets lots of merits for our works and health. Executives or company owner should know the power of taking a nap and introduce it to improve our productivity and make a comfortable place.

Original Word Count: 139

Corrected version

1. Natural Version

I don’t usually take naps, but I do occasionally after lunch or after going to the gym on weekends—not during working hours. Sleep is an essential part of my life because if I don’t get enough at night, my productivity drops significantly compared to others. That’s why I make sure to get enough sleep on weekdays, which helps me avoid feeling the need for a nap during the day. Still, I believe naps are beneficial for both work performance and overall health. Executives and business owners should understand the power of napping and consider introducing it to improve productivity and create a more comfortable workplace for employees.

Revised Word Count: 118

2. Casual Version

I don’t usually take naps, but I sometimes do after lunch or after hitting the gym on weekends—not during work, though. Sleep is super important to me because if I don’t get enough at night, my productivity drops a lot compared to others. That’s why I make sure to sleep well during the week, so I don’t feel the need for naps during the day. But I still think naps are great—they can really boost your performance and help your health. I think business owners should realize how powerful naps can be and let people take them to improve productivity and make workplaces more comfortable.

Revised Word Count: 116

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