Day 105. Trip to Cebu.

I had been to Cebu, Philippines for 6 days to have a vacation. Lots of people in Cebu can speak English, so I was able to communicate with them in English. In fact, conversation in the trip is not so difficult, so I can’t practice English skilles. But, I got a little confidence to talk to someone in English. Anyway, Cebu is the great place to watch a shark or fishes in the beautiful sea and take a vacation in the hotel with pools and private beach. I diffinitely come back to Cebu again.

Revised version:

I spent six days in Cebu, Philippines, for a vacation. Many people there can speak English, so I was able to communicate with them easily. However, the conversations during the trip weren’t too difficult, so I didn’t get much chance to practice my English skills. Still, I gained a little confidence in speaking with others in English, which is a good step forward. Cebu is an amazing place to see sharks and tropical fish in the beautiful sea. It’s also perfect for relaxing at a hotel with pools and a private beach. I definitely want to visit Cebu again in the future!

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