Day 60. Fever day

I took time off work because of a fever. I went to the hospital and got the inspection for infection. I got the covid-19 second time. I had it after vacation in Hawaii one year ago. This time might be due to the music festival.

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Natural Version (100+ Words)

I took time off work because I had a fever. I went to the hospital and got tested for an infection. It turns out I have COVID-19 for the second time. The first time I caught it was after my vacation in Hawaii one year ago. This time, I suspect it might be because of the music festival I attended recently. Thankfully, my symptoms aren’t too severe, but I’m focusing on resting and recovering at home. It’s frustrating to catch it again, but I’ll take this as a reminder to be more cautious at crowded events in the future.

Casual Version (100+ Words)

I had to take a day off work because I came down with a fever. I went to the hospital to get checked, and it turns out I got COVID-19 again. The last time I had it was after my trip to Hawaii a year ago. This time, I think it might have been from the music festival I went to. It’s kind of annoying to catch it for a second time, but at least my symptoms aren’t too bad. I’m just trying to rest and recover at home now. Next time, I’ll be more careful when going to crowded events.

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Original: 76
Natural Version: 123
Casual Version: 118

Score (original): 7/10
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