本気で英語を勉強してみた〜Day 24〜

こんばんは～。
yasuです。

昨日の勉強成果

745〜815　ネイティブキャンプ
1225〜1255 英検単語アプリ
1800〜1830 grammar in use
1900〜2000 英作文日記
2100〜2130 ネイティブキャンプ

Today's study time: 180min（3時間00分)




Total study time: 5625分＋180分＝5805分

感想は

TOEICテスト申し込みましたー。
昨日更新してなかった。
自分との約束守っていきましょう！！

英作文

添削前

July.9th.2020(Thu)
Today was clear in the morning and in the afternoon the rainy.
I was ate breakfast at 7:30 A.M. in the morning.
I was reading the newspapers after breakfast this morning.
Today's topic, 「company's and local gavernment will cooperation , strengthening information technology in school.」
In particular story , school isn't enough information technology equipment .
Currentry Colonavirus affecting in the world .
Government going to solution school of problem.
The company has strong recruitment.
Employees of the company is working 1300 people.
They would work to education relation.

添削後

Today was sunny in the morning and in the afternoon it was rainy.
I ate breakfast at 7.30 A.M.
I was reading the newspapers after breakfast this morning.
Today's topic was ,,Company and local government will cooperate and strengthen information technology in schools.
In particular story, there isn't enough information technology equipment at the school.
Currently, Coronavirus is affecting the world.
Government is going to find the solution for the problem that school has.
The company has strong recruitment.
There are 1300 employees in the company.
They want to work to help the education.

wasとか抜けがちー。

本日もやっていきましょう。

If you don't practice you don't deserve to win.
（練習しなければ、勝つ資格はない）
ーAndre Agassi