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Rewrite following sentences with appropriate grammar and vocabularies.

1. Time: 2024年9月8日 19:53

2. Weather: cloudy, little bit cooler than yesterday

3. Health: very well

4. Meals: M gyoza, curry and miso soup. L Ramen. D Shumai

5. News: Autumn Sumo much has been started today

6. Events: I watched that a cat vomited. It is no surprise when I think about it, a cat only has sharp teeth, and they cannot break down foods, so things a cat vomited contains solid materials.

7. Impressed: a cat vomited in front of me.

8. Thank: I saw the mystery of life. I saw so many bugs on the ground with a flashlight.

9. Ideas: A plan and a strategy are just a dream if you actually don’t do them.

10. Achieved: I listed my dreams and aspirations.

11. Desire: Do things along with the plan.

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Certainly! Here are the revised sentences:

1. Time: September 8, 2024, 19:53

2. Weather: Cloudy, with a slight chill compared to yesterday

3. Health: Excellent

4. Meals: Breakfast: Gyoza, curry, and miso soup. Lunch: Ramen. Dinner: Shumai

5. News: The Autumn Sumo tournament began today.

6. Events: I witnessed a cat vomiting. Given that cats have sharp teeth but cannot easily break down food, it’s not surprising that what the cat vomited contained solid materials.

7. Impressed: I was struck by the sight of a cat vomiting right in front of me.

8. Thankful: I marveled at the mysteries of life when I discovered numerous bugs on the ground while using a flashlight.

9. Ideas: Plans and strategies remain mere dreams unless you actively pursue them.

10. Achieved: I have listed my dreams and aspirations.

11. Desire: Execute tasks according to the plan.

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Make words bold which I impressed with.
Contents

1. Time

2. Weather

3. Health

4. Meals

5. News

6. Events

7. Impressed

8. Thank

9. Ideas

10. Achieved

11. Desire