令和6年9月13日tranquility

Title:令和6年9月13日tranquility

(Raw sentences)

Rewrite following sentences with appropriate grammar and vocabularies.

1. Time: 23:39

2. Weather: sunny very good

3. Health: Good physical, bad mental. but they are virtually same.

4. Exercise: run 30min 4,4km

5. Meals: B bread, L small tiny noodle with egg, D fried noodle called Yakisoba in japanese. Do you know it ?

6. News: Electricity will be shorten soon because a strong summer heat

7. Events: i think events don’t happen without going outside.

8. Impressed: Taking a cold shower after hard jogging is so invigorating.

9. Thank: Doing something helps me staying without a noisy feeling.

10. Ideas: Putting nothing on the bed is quite good environment for me cuz I can lay down on it quickly.

11. Achieved: I wrote a diary and ran.

12. Desire: charge for anything you are doing. Go.

(Improved)

1. Current time is 23:39.

2. The weather is sunny and very pleasant.

3. My physical health is good, but my mental health is poor, though they are almost the same.

4. Today's exercise consisted of running for 30 minutes, covering a distance of 4.4 kilometers.

5. Meals today were: breakfast with bread, a small portion of noodles with egg for lunch, and dinner was Yakisoba, a type of fried noodle from Japan. Have you heard of it?

6. There will soon be electricity shortages due to the intense summer heat.

7. I believe events usually require going outside to happen.

8. Taking a cold shower after a strenuous jog is incredibly refreshing.

9. Engaging in activities helps me maintain a sense of tranquility.

10. I find that leaving nothing on the bed creates a comfortable environment for me, as I can quickly lie down on it.

11. Today, I accomplished writing in my diary and going for a run.

12. Commit fully to everything you do. Go for it!

---

Make words bold which I impressed with.

Contents

1. Time:

2. Weather:

3. Health:

4. Exercise:

5. Meals:

6. News:

7. Events:

8. Impressed:

9. Thank:

10. Ideas:

11. Achieved:

12. Desire: