英語日記＃７５

Hi

I haven't heard back from the job I applied for.
So I checked hiring page again.
And then it has finished!! 
I was disappointed.
Okay…NEXT!!!

I often go to cafe before work.
There are good breads there.
I'm so happy.

Corrected versions

Hi!

I hadn't heard back about the job I applied for,
so I checked the hiring page again,
only to find that the listing had already been taken down.
I was disappointed,
but… on to the next one!

I often go to a café before work.
They have really good bread there, which makes me happy.