英語日記＃７２

Hi

Today was my dad's birth day.
So I ate cakes and sushi!!
It was good!
 
I have energy now and applied a new job.
I want to work more!
 

Corrected versions

Hi!

Today was my dad's birthday,
so I had cake and sushi!
It was delicious!
I feel energized now, and I even applied for a new job.
I'm excited to work more!