英語日記　#10　skincare

Ready to dive into some skincare secrets?

I tell you about my skincare routine.
I use a gentle cleanser every morning to remove dirt and oil.
Then hydrate with a nourishing moisturizer.
Once a week, I treat myself to a soothing face mask. It really makes a difference!
When choosing skincare products, I always make sure to check if they include vitamin C.
Thanks to vitamin C, I feel that my skin has become a little brighter.
I'm curious about your skincare routine.Would you mind sharing it?

Corrections by ChatGPT

Let me tell you about my skincare routine. I use a gentle cleanser every morning to remove dirt and oil, then follow up with a nourishing moisturizer to hydrate my skin. Once a week, I treat myself to a soothing face mask, and it really makes a difference! When choosing skincare products, I always make sure they include vitamin C. Thanks to vitamin C, I feel like my skin has become a little brighter. I’m curious about your skincare routine. Would you mind sharing it?

主な修正点：

1. "I tell you about my skincare routine." → "Let me tell you about my skincare routine."
   "Let me" にすると、より丁寧な表現になります。

2. "Then hydrate with a nourishing moisturizer." → "then follow up with a nourishing moisturizer to hydrate my skin."
   "follow up with" と "to hydrate my skin" を追加して、意味を明確にしました。

3. "Once a week, I treat myself to a soothing face mask. It really makes a difference!" → "Once a week, I treat myself to a soothing face mask, and it really makes a difference!"
   "and" で文をつなげ、流れをスムーズにしました。

4. "Thanks to vitamin C, I feel that my skin has become a little brighter." → "Thanks to vitamin C, I feel like my skin has become a little brighter."
   "feel like" の方が口語的で自然な表現です。