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日記

昨日聞いたニュースで私は落ち込んだ。俳優の三浦春馬が自殺したそうだ。もちろん友達でもないし、ファンでもない。けれど、彼は映画、ドラマ、舞台に引っ張りだこで、歌だってリリースするようなスターである。みんな悩みを持っていて、その内容は他の人にはわからない。何もかも持っているように見える人にも悩みがあるのだ。ある意味人間は平等だと思う。

英作文

I felt depressed at the news yesterday. The actor, Haruma Miura hanged himself. Of cause not my friend, and I was not a fan of him. But He is a star that he is much sought after by films, TV dramas and theatrics. Also he released CD.
All of us have our own troubles that other people don't know about. It seems that he has everything, but he has troubles too.
In a way, I think that human beings are equal.

正解

I felt depressed about the news yesterday. The actor, Haruma Miura committed suicide. Of course he was not my friend, and I was not a fan of him. He was so popular. He was playing in lots of film, TV dramas and theaters.
He also released some CDs.
All of us have problems, which can not be seen from outside. Even the people who seem to have everything also have problems.
In a way, I think that all human beings are equal.

A:I feel depressed about が普通。

「自殺する」He killed himself. He committed suicide[su:said] 

He was so popular. He was playing in lots of film, TV dramas and theaters. He also released a CD / CDs.

 All of us have problems, which can not be seen from outside. Even the people who seem to have everything also have problems. 

all human beings

説明は明日スカイプで。

S:ありがとうございます。
all human beings は文章として抜いた方がいいってことですかね？

A:allを足したほうがいいという意味です。

S:あ、わかりました、すんません！