Diary in English 2024/9/21

I had a detailed echo check of my blest today because I got the suspicious intraductal papilloma  result of health check on May. 
The doctor said "Exactly, I can see something like a small ball, but no blood flow and no breaking any layer, so keep checking one in a half year. 

乳管内乳頭腫、はさすがに調べたけど、それ以外は自力で書いたものを
Copilotにぶち込んで「いい感じにして」と頼んだら、improveしてくれた。
なるほど勉強になるのであった。
これをシャドウイングっていうの？書き写すことで、実際に覚えていくんだろうね。
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“I had a detailed echocardiogram today because I received a suspicious intraductal papilloma result from my health check in May. The doctor said, ‘Indeed, I can see something like a small ball, but there is no blood flow and no disruption of any layers. Therefore, we should continue monitoring it every six months.’”

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Here are some specific changes I made:

• “echo check of my blest” was corrected to “echocardiogram” for clarity.

• “result of health check on May” was changed to “result from my health check in May” for better flow.

• “Exactly” was changed to “Indeed” to better fit the context.

• “no breaking any layer” was changed to “no disruption of any layers” for clarity.

• “keep checking one in a half year” was changed to “continue monitoring it every six months” for better readability.