【英作文練習③】良くなる空気

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①噂には聞いていてもびっくりします
＜訂正前＞
Air pollution is very serious in China.
I felt shocked when the first time I watched that yellow air.
I instantly recognize that isn't good for our health.
＜訂正後＞
Air pollution is a very serious issue in China.
I FELT SHOCKED WHEN THE FIRST TIME I SAW THAT YELLOW AIR.
I instantly recognizeD that it isn't good for our health.

②良くなっています
<訂正前>
Chinese gavorment hardly take measures against air pollution.
It gradually improving right now.
<訂正後>
Chinese government hardly take measures against air pollution.
It IS BECOMING BETTER.

③風力に期待。
<訂正前>
I think most hopeful measure is wind power station and solar energy.
I have seen countless them when I'm in train.
China is making use of their huge land.
<訂正後>
I think THE most hopeful measureS ARE wind power station and solar energy.
I have seen many wind power station when I'm in THE train.
China HAS ALREADY STARTED MAKE USE OF THEIR HUGE LAND TO SOLVE THE ISSUE.