OREO Writing What I'm good at

I'm good at speaking in public place. Because I can become friends in there . for example I became friend my moms company vice president. and I like speaking with someone I met for the first time. For example I find it easy to make friends if I want. So I like speaking in public places.

Chat GPT 先生の添削結果

Original:

I'm good at speaking in public places. Because I can become friends in there. for example I became friend my moms company vice president. and I like speaking with someone I met for the first time. for example I can become friends easy if I want. so I like speaking in public places.

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Revised Version:

I’m good at speaking in public places because it allows me to make new friends easily. For example, I became friends with the vice president of my mom’s company through a conversation. I also enjoy talking with people I meet for the first time. I find it easy to make friends if I want to. That’s why I like speaking in public places.

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Key changes:

1. Grammar and sentence structure:

   • "in public place" was corrected to "in public places" to match plural usage.

   • Replaced "Because" with a full sentence to avoid a sentence fragment: "because it allows me to make new friends easily."

2. Clarity and flow:

   • Combined related sentences for better flow, e.g., "I became friends with..." and "That’s why I like speaking..." to make the reasoning more cohesive.

3. Word choice:

   • "I can become friends easy" was changed to "I find it easy to make friends" for grammatical accuracy.

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