OREO Writing My favorite sweet

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My favorite sweet is chocolate. First, chocolate tastes sweet. For example, milk chocolate is a type that has a very sweet flavor. Second, chocolate smell very delicious. For example ,chocolate cake and chocolate ice cream both have a wonderful chocolate aroma.Therefore, I like chocolate.

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修正前
My favorite sweet is chocolate. First chocolate tase sweet. For example milk chocolate. Second, chocolate smell very delicious. For example chocolate cake, chocolate ice cream. Therefore I like chocolate.
添削結果
My favorite sweet is chocolate. First, chocolate tastes sweet. For example, milk chocolate is a type that has a very sweet flavor. Second, chocolate smells very delicious. For example, chocolate cake and chocolate ice cream both have a wonderful chocolate aroma. Therefore, I like chocolate.

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【改善点】

1. "tase"を"tastes"に修正し、動詞の形式を正しました。

2. "milk chocolate"や"chocolate cake"など具体例を使う際に、より自然な文脈に改善しました。

3. 文全体において、句読点や冠詞を追加し、文をより流暢にしました。

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