OREO Writing Did you have any fun today?
No, I didn’t.. Because I just have to do my homework. For example, I worked on Math, English, and Japanese assignments. Because Every day feels the same. For example, I just play with my friends and next hour it became night.That’s why I didn’t have any fun today.
Chat GPT先生の添削結果
Original Version:
No.I don’t . Because I just have to do my homework. For example, Math English and Japanese. Because everyday is feels same. For example, I just play with my friends and next hour it became night.So I don't have any fun today.
Release Version :
No, I didn’t. I didn’t have fun because I had to do my homework all day. For example, I worked on Math, English, and Japanese assignments. Every day feels the same. For instance, I play with my friends for a little while, and before I know it, the day is over, and it’s already night. That’s why I didn’t have any fun today.
主な修正点
時制の一致
"No. I don’t." を過去形の "No, I didn’t." に修正しました。質問が過去形なので、それに合わせる必要があります。
冠詞や文法の細かい修正
"Because everyday is feels same." を "Every day feels the same." に修正しました。
"For example, Math English and Japanese." に冠詞を加え、"For example, I worked on Math, English, and Japanese assignments." にしました。
文章の流れをスムーズに
"So I don’t have any fun today." を "That’s why I didn’t have any fun today." に変更し、まとめの部分がより自然になるようにしました。