2023 2回目 準1級エッセイ Should companies be required to produce goods that are easy to recycle?
こんにちは。
英検コーチのMayです。
英検準1級のエッセイは、誤解してしまった！という方も多かったのでは。
リサイクルしやすい商品です。
環境に優しい商品ではなく。
うわ！ッと、私の生徒さんでも1つのサポーティングアイディアを「環境に優しい商品」で書いてしまった、と言っていました。
他で、カバーできていれば良いなあ～
精読していないと、違う方向を書いてしまう、ということが他の級でもありますね。
精読は、タイトル理解にも役立つのですね。
タイトルからずれていると、内容点を初め、他の観点も残念な点になってしまう可能性があります。
英検も、ますます手強くなってきていますね。
Should companies be required to produce goods that are easy to recycle?
(company profits, customer demand, pollution, product quality)
Companies should have a responsibility to produce items which are easily recycled for the following two reasons.
First, producing recyclable merchandise is crucial due to the growing awareness of the importance of environmental issues, leading to increasing companies’ profits. For example, customers are more likely to purchase products from a company that makes easy-to-recycle products. This is due to growing concern about global warming. Consequently, this tendency would allow environmentally conscious companies to flourish.
Second, companies should play a significant role in dealing with reducing pollution. For instance, microplastics and other pollutants have been found inside the bodies of animals and as far down as Antarctica. Products that are easy to recycle might encourage recycling and reduce the pollution in the land and air. As a result, companies which produce recyclable items contribute to the reduction of pollution.
In conclusion, it is indispensable for companies to produce easily recyclable goods. (150 words)
1級用 追加理由
Finally, companies need to meet customer demand by producing recyclable items. Due to growing environmental concerns, customers are looking for ways to be more eco-friendly. This increases the demand for products that are easy to recycle.
Follow-up Question
違うアプローチでのQに答えることで、ライティングはもちろんのこと、スピーキングにもお役立ち。
こちらも添削➔発話トレーニングをしています。3文でOK.
Q) Should companies be required to switch to reusable products?
Q) Sample Answer for Follow-Up Q :
I agree companies should be required to switch to reusable products. This change can significantly reduce their environmental footprint by cutting down on single-use waste. It also reflects a commitment to sustainability, meeting the growing demand for eco-friendly products and bolstering a company's reputation.
スピーキングではこのくらいの分量。
Double-checked by Dannie (British)
ここ数年は、信頼のネイティブ講師👆にダブルチェックを依頼。日本人からみた英検で点数を落とさない為の添削、そして、ネイティブから見た、wordy, redundant, unnatural, collocation…などという観点からチェック。
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＜誤解のないよう注意＞
"Eco-cars" typically refer to environmentally friendly or eco-friendly cars, which are designed to have a reduced impact on the environment compared to traditional gasoline-powered vehicles. These cars often use alternative fuels like electricity, hydrogen, or biofuels and have features like improved fuel efficiency and lower emissions.
Recycling, on the other hand, refers to the process of collecting, processing, and reusing materials that would otherwise be discarded as waste. This can include items like paper, plastic, glass, metals, and more.
Eco-cars and recycling are related in the sense that both are efforts to reduce environmental impact, but they are not the same thing. Eco-cars are a type of vehicle, while recycling involves the sustainable management of materials to reduce waste and conserve resources.
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