The Summing Up 設問②

設問②
The book was read in typescript by a very clever woman who at that time was good enough to be interested in me. She told me that this chapter was inadequate. I rewrote it; but I do not think I much improved it.

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私の要約
設問② 当時、優秀な女性に読んでもらったが、その章は不十分だと言われ、再度書き直すが、改善が不十分だったと感じた。