IELTS Writing part 1 （1）

The maps outline the variations that took place in public park called Grange Park from 1920 as it is now. Overall, the park was modernized to offer people more possibilities than they used to own decades ago such as a cafe, playground and a parking area.

In details, the park was opened in 1920 and entertainment facilities including a lager stage and various areas for recreation have since been added to it. There was conspicuous relocation in terms of seats and the only area that remained were the entrance as well as one tiny garden. Apart from the facts, the fountain was devastated in favor of a rose garden with surrounding four seats around it. To the left of the new garden, the previous stage for musicians was destroyed for constructing an amphitheater for concerts. The change necessitated the removal of both seatings as well as the rose garden in the bottom left corner of the map.

Moreover, the pond for water plants was diminished for the pretext establishing a children’s play area. Furthermore, the cafe was built the location where there was a rose garden. In stead of the pond, a water feature was manufactured accounting for the bottom right corner.