英作文15日目

Theme:nature

Let me talk about nature.
Do you like nature? What do you imagine when you hear the word “nature”?
I guess you will think of some mountains, forests, weeds, and so on.
As for me, I love nature. I love walking in a forest, and hiking in a mountain.
When I do something in nature, I can feel very relaxed, and can reduce my stress.
I believe nature has an important role for our lives.
But currently, there are some bad problems regading nature.
You know, one of the big problems is global warming. Also people are destroying much nature for some reasons.
If this situation continues, we can’t live good lives with nature.
We should consider how to improve this sitation.

Sure, here’s the revised version of your text:

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Let me talk about nature. Do you like nature? What do you imagine when you hear the word “nature”? I guess you might think of mountains, forests, plants, and so on.

As for me, I love nature. I love walking in the forest and hiking in the mountains. When I spend time in nature, I feel very relaxed and can reduce my stress. I believe nature plays an important role in our lives.

However, there are currently some significant problems regarding nature. One of the big issues is global warming. Additionally, people are destroying much of nature for various reasons. If this situation continues, we won’t be able to enjoy good lives with nature. We should consider how to improve this situation.

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I made some minor adjustments for clarity and grammar. Your thoughts and points are well-expressed!