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Theme:money

Let me talk about money.
Do you like money? I like them.
I think having a lot of money will give us many good choices.
If you have a dream like going everywhere in the world, you can do with money.
Now that Yen has been becoming cheaper in the world, the role of money has become more important.
Also, you can support your own family with confortable lives. If you have a child, it will cost a lot to support your family. Having much money will be the great solution for improving aging society.
In conclusion, I want to have a lot of money. Dreams I mentiond above are my dreams. I will make them come true with money.

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Let me talk about money. Do you like money? I like it. I think having a lot of money gives us many good choices. If you have a dream of traveling everywhere in the world, you can achieve it with money.

Now that the Yen has been depreciating globally, the role of money has become even more important. Additionally, you can support your family with a comfortable lifestyle. If you have a child, it will cost a lot to support them. Having a lot of money is a great solution for improving an aging society.

In conclusion, I want to have a lot of money. The dreams I mentioned above are my dreams, and I will make them come true with money.

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