昨日の英語日記をジンバブエの英語の先生に添削してもらいました。

これが昨日の英語日記。

それを以下のように添削して、表現を変えてもらいました。

I am feeling tired because I worked hard today. I taught four lessons and I had fun because my students were actively participating in class.

I was also involved in other tasks such as writing a press release statement and I am in charge of the management of a conference that we are working on. I was satisfied with the work I did today. However, I am sleepy because I worked hard as I put in my best effort into my work.

I managed to go back my home and I enjoyed a drink.

I then took my online English class and discussed various topics with my teacher, and this was incredibly enjoyable.

I felt like sleeping early today because I expended much energy at work. I think I'll avoid this tomorrow by remaining calm and relaxed. That way I won't feel exhausted at the end of the day.

以上のように変わると。

DMMオンラインの先生も日記をさらにいい英語の表現に変えるのは、英語向上の良い練習になると話していました。

これを使いつつ、たまにはニュースに対して自分の意見を英語で述べたりしながら、より正確な表現を身につけていけたらと思います。

大事なのは、続けることですね。