Day 26. Spring, summer, fall or winter; what is your favorite season?

11/14/2024
Spring, summer, fall or winter; what is your favorite season?

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I like fall season because the gradation from summer to fall is comfortable and the air is chilly temprature. When I feel the transition of that, I get the fresh mind and excited about the fall season. I liked summer when I was a child, but Japan is much hotter than now in the summer, so I can’t stand up with an outgoing at one step from my house.

Original Word Count: 77

Corrected version

1. Natural Version
I like the fall season because the transition from summer to autumn feels refreshing, and the air becomes pleasantly cool. When I notice that shift, I feel a renewed energy and get excited about the start of fall. The cooler temperatures are a welcome break after the intense summer heat. I used to love summer as a child, but Japan’s summers are much hotter now, and it’s tough to handle. Just stepping outside feels overwhelming in that heat, so fall has become my favorite season. There’s something calming about the crisp air and the beautiful colors of autumn.

Revised Word Count: 113

2. Casual Version
I love fall because the gradual change from summer to cooler weather feels nice, and the air has a comfortable chill to it. That shift always makes me feel refreshed and excited for autumn. Fall feels like a break from the intense summer heat, which can get exhausting. I used to love summer as a kid, but Japan’s summers are way hotter now, and it’s honestly hard to handle. Just stepping outside feels like too much sometimes. So now, fall is definitely my favorite season. I love seeing the leaves change and feeling the crisp, fresh air.

Revised Word Count: 110