Day 39. Tell me what you did today.

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」（アルク刊）Q.039
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I worked till 6 p.m, and trained my chest at home. After that, I was ready for dinner like seard tuna on the vinegared rice. That tuna was sent from Yaizu city, Shizuoka prefucture where I paid resident tax instead of paying to my living city. It was so delicious. This is the national system in Japan called “Furusato Nouzei”. It is so useful and helpful for ether us and local government where dosen’t get enough tax money. I recommend the tuna for applying it because it is convinient to eat it because the tuna is freezed and just unzipping.

Original Word Count: 129

Corrected version

1. Natural Version

I worked until 6 p.m. today and then did a chest workout at home. After that, I prepared dinner, which was seared tuna on vinegared rice. The tuna was sent from Yaizu City in Shizuoka Prefecture as part of the Furusato Nouzei system, where you pay your resident tax to a different city or town instead of the one you live in. The tuna was absolutely delicious. This national system in Japan is very useful because it benefits both taxpayers and local governments that need more funding. I highly recommend the tuna—it’s so convenient since it’s frozen and ready to eat as soon as you defrost it.

Revised Word Count: 116

2. Casual Version

I worked until 6 p.m. today and then did a chest workout at home. For dinner, I had seared tuna on vinegared rice. The tuna came from Yaizu City in Shizuoka Prefecture, where I sent my resident tax instead of paying it to my own city. It’s part of a system in Japan called Furusato Nouzei, and the tuna was so good. I think this system is great because it helps people like me and also supports smaller local governments that need extra tax money. The tuna is super easy to prepare, too—it comes frozen, and you just defrost and eat it.

Revised Word Count: 112