Day 35. When do you feel happy?

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」（アルク刊）Q.035
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I feel happy when I eat a delicious beaf, watching comedy show and feeling the nature. When I devoted myself to using iPhone and watching shorts endlessly, I feel unhappy and my life is sucks. Basically, I think the human should live as like primitive people because modern people’s lifestyle is not much to the original human. The human evolution can’t keep up with the chang of modern technology and work style.

Original Word Count: 93

Corrected version

1. Natural Version

I feel happy when I eat delicious beef, watch comedy shows, or spend time in nature. On the other hand, I feel miserable when I waste hours scrolling endlessly on my iPhone, watching short videos without purpose. It makes me feel like my life is meaningless. Honestly, I believe humans are meant to live more like primitive people because modern lifestyles don’t suit our natural instincts. The pace of human evolution can’t keep up with the rapid changes in modern technology and work environments. It’s important to slow down and live in a way that feels more natural to us.

Revised Word Count: 115

2. Casual Version

I feel happy when I eat tasty beef, watch funny comedy shows, or just relax in nature. But when I spend hours glued to my iPhone, endlessly watching short videos, I feel awful—like my life is a mess. Honestly, I think humans should live more like primitive people. Modern life, with all its technology and crazy work schedules, doesn’t really match how we’re supposed to live. Human evolution can’t keep up with how fast technology is changing. That’s probably why so many people feel stressed out. We should try to live in a way that feels more natural and balanced.

Revised Word Count: 114