Day 27. Who pops up in your mind right now?

11/15/2024
Who pops up in your mind right now?

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」（アルク刊）Q.027
質問の転載については出版社に確認し利用条件を満たして行っております。

My favorite singer pops up in my mind because I got to know the national tour of my favorite rocks group named Southern All Stars. Still I don’t know whether  I get that ticket, I’m so excited and looking forward to it. They are over 60 years old, so It would not be suprising if they can’t hold live performance. I have never seen them for now, so I want to win no matter what happens.

Original Word Count: 95

Corrected Version

1. Natural Version
My favorite singer comes to mind because I just heard about the national tour of my favorite rock group, Southern All Stars. I don’t know yet if I’ll get a ticket, but I’m already so excited and looking forward to it. The band members are over 60 years old, so it wouldn’t be surprising if they stopped performing live in the near future. I’ve never had the chance to see them in concert, so I really hope I can win a ticket this time. It feels like a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, and I’ll do everything I can to make it happen.

Revised Word Count: 113

2. Casual Version
I just heard that my favorite rock group, Southern All Stars, is going on a national tour, and I can’t stop thinking about it! I’m not sure if I’ll get a ticket yet, but I’m so pumped and can’t wait. Since the members are all over 60, it wouldn’t be shocking if they stopped doing live shows soon. I’ve never seen them perform live before, so I really, really want to get a ticket this time. It’s a dream of mine, and I’ll do whatever it takes to make it happen. Fingers crossed!

Revised Word Count: 110