Day 33. What was the last movie you saw?
I watched the documentary movie “Inside Job”. It is narrated by Matt Damon. The story is to explain the financial crisis in 2008-2010 and pursue the original cause and something derived. When that was happend, I was a junior high student so I don’t know how the world went to the economic depression and how it efected the Japanese economy. I learned a lots from it but I didn’t get later question.
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Corrected version
1. Natural Version
I watched the documentary movie Inside Job, narrated by Matt Damon. The film explains the financial crisis of 2008-2010, exploring its root causes and the consequences that followed. When the crisis happened, I was still a junior high school student, so I didn’t understand how the global economy fell into such a deep recession or how it affected Japan’s economy. Watching this documentary taught me a lot about the complex factors behind the crisis, including risky financial practices and government policies. However, there are still some parts of the movie that I didn’t fully understand. I plan to revisit those sections or research more about them later.
Revised Word Count: 125
2. Casual Version
I recently watched the documentary Inside Job, which is narrated by Matt Damon. It explains the financial crisis from 2008 to 2010, digging into what caused it and the effects that followed. Back when it happened, I was just a junior high school student, so I had no idea how the world ended up in such a huge recession or how it impacted Japan’s economy. The movie helped me learn a lot about things like risky financial deals and government decisions. That said, there were a few parts I didn’t really get. Maybe I’ll watch it again or look it up later.
Revised Word Count: 122