Day 31. What has been a surprising finding for you lately?

「Q&A Diary 英語で3行日記」（アルク刊）Q.031
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Only a capitalist get the financial success in Japan or capital country like the U.S. Labors work harder, earn the money and work again. That means unless you become a capitalist, you can’t have the free of time you can spend and escape from the fear of money. I make a desidion to start my own company within 10 years. I don’t have any idea of my business, but I want to be a executive and do the things in which I immerse myself enthsiastically.

Original Word Count: 120

Corrected version

1. Natural Version
Only capitalists achieve true financial success in Japan or other capitalist countries like the U.S. Workers labor tirelessly, earn money, and then go back to work again. This cycle means that unless you become a capitalist, you’ll never have the freedom to enjoy your time or escape the constant fear of financial insecurity. I’ve decided to start my own company within the next 10 years. I don’t have a concrete business idea yet, but I dream of becoming an executive and dedicating myself wholeheartedly to something I’m passionate about. Building a future where I can control my time is my ultimate goal.

Revised Word Count: 112

2. Casual Version
In Japan or other capitalist countries like the U.S., only capitalists seem to reach real financial success. Workers just keep grinding—they work hard, earn money, and then do it all over again. Unless you become a capitalist, it’s hard to have the freedom to spend your time the way you want or escape worrying about money. That’s why I’ve decided to start my own company within the next 10 years. I don’t know what kind of business I’ll create yet, but I really want to be an executive and work on something I’m super passionate about.

Revised Word Count: 111