Day 34. What's in your fridge right now?
There are always natto and tofu in my fridge. In my freezer, there is konjac jelly. The freezed konjac jelly is better than normal one because it tastes like sherbet. It is cheap and a lot of them in one pack. Anyway, I drank today, so I can’t write down the content in english as I usally do. From now on, I will do this before drinking alchole. I hope you have a good dream. Bye:)
Original Word Count: 94
Corrected version
1. Natural Version
I always keep natto and tofu in my fridge. In my freezer, I stock konjac jelly. Frozen konjac jelly is much better than the regular one because it tastes like sherbet. It’s cheap and comes in large packs, which makes it a perfect snack. By the way, I drank alcohol today, so I can’t write as clearly in English as I usually do. From now on, I’ll make sure to write my diary before drinking alcohol to avoid this situation. Anyway, I hope you have sweet dreams tonight. Good night and see you tomorrow!
Revised Word Count: 109
2. Casual Version
I always have natto and tofu in my fridge. As for my freezer, I keep konjac jelly in there. When it’s frozen, it’s way better than normal—it tastes just like sherbet! Plus, it’s super cheap, and you get a lot in one pack. Anyway, I had some drinks today, so I’m not able to write in English as well as I usually do. Next time, I’ll make sure to write my diary before drinking alcohol. Lesson learned! That’s it for today. Have a great night and sweet dreams. See you next time!
Revised Word Count: 111