Positive or Negative?: The Influence TV programs Give to Younger Generation.

Theme

● Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
● Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
● Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion
● Suggested length: 120–150 words

TOPIC
Agree or disagree:
Movies and TV programs have more negative influence than positive on how young people behave.

● Cost
● Society
● Entertainment
● Culture

My essay

I do not think that movies and TV programs have more nagatlve influence than positive on how young people behave. I have two reasons to support my opinion. (28)

First of all, we can learn what is happening in the world easily through news programs. I believe that this enables younger generation to pay attention to global issues and take actions to make the world better. (37)

Additionally, some TV programs and movies are often cost-efficient ways for young people to learn differnt cultures. In the global society, it is essential to understand and accept different cultures. Through TV programs and movies, younger people can learn how to behave when they encounter some different cultures. (48)

As the reasons I stated above shows, I think TV programs and movies have more positive effect on younger generation’s behavior. (21)

Self Analysis

・words are 134 in total : good
・good use in the discourse markers
・was able to use some good vocabulary
・around 20 minutes
→totally fair◎