英語日記　12/20

今回はchatGPTじゃなくてDeepL Writeを使って修正してみたよ。
訂正前の文章、どっか行っちゃったので訂正後だけ記録。

日記

I cleaned my room on my day off. The room had not been cleaned since autumn, and there was a pile of documents and books that I had to clear out. On work days, I can only do a few tasks and write in my diary. Therefore, I have a lot of things I want to do on my days off. However, I cannot do everything, and time passes quickly. Although it was cold outside, I still took the dog for a walk. I am excited about the dinner party tomorrow after work.

添削

there was a pile of documents and books that I had to clear out
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there were a pile of documents and books that I had to clear out

書類も本も複数形だから、wereのほうが良いそうな。

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今日の感想

・昨日のレッスンで日記聞けなかったので、朝イチのレッスンで確認した～
・自分で書けるわけじゃないけど、訂正された文章とかを代替理解できるようになってきたから進歩かしら。
・ナチュラルリーダーを教えてもらったし、音読練習したいね。