Humbled daily, grateful daily.

 From Today, I'll try to keep a diary in English every day.
 Because, I have to improve my English due to my current job.
But I hate studying English.
It's too much trouble to memorize words and even more trouble to memorize grammar.
From junior high school to today, I have never been able to continue studying English.
That is why I decided to try my own method.
The only thing that I can do everyday without any difficulty is to write, if possible. So I decided to write a daily diary in English.
Of course, using DeepL.
Humble daily, grateful daily, small efforts everyday will eventually produce big results. That is what I believe.

<Chat GPTによる修正版>
From today, I'll try to keep a diary in English every day because I have to improve my English for my current job. However, studying English has always been challenging for me. It's too much trouble to memorize words and even more trouble to memorize grammar. From junior high school until now, I have never been able to continue studying English consistently. That is why I decided to try my own method.

The only thing I can do every day without any difficulty is write, if possible. So, I decided to write a daily diary in English. Of course, I will be using DeepL for assistance. Humble daily efforts, grateful reflections, and small actions every day will eventually produce big results. That is what I believe.

<Chat GPTによる具体的な修正箇所と理由>
Original: From Today, I'll try to keep a diary in English every day.
Correction: From today, I'll try to keep a diary in English every day.
Reason: "Today" should be lowercase because it is not at the beginning of the sentence and does not need capitalization.

Original: Because, I have to improve my English due to my current job.
Correction: because I have to improve my English for my current job.
Reason: The word "because" should not be capitalized or preceded by a comma when it follows a sentence. Additionally, "for my current job" is more concise and natural than "due to my current job."

Original: It's too much trouble to memorize words and even more trouble to memorize grammar.
Correction: No change needed.
Reason: This sentence is clear and correct.

Original: From junior high school to today, I have never been able to continue studying English.
Correction: From junior high school until now, I have never been able to continue studying English consistently.
Reason: "Until now" is slightly clearer than "to today," and adding "consistently" emphasizes the ongoing nature of the difficulty.

Original: That is why I decided to try my own method.
Correction: No change needed.
Reason: This sentence is clear and correct.

Original: The only thing that I can do everyday without any difficulty is to write, if possible.
Correction: The only thing I can do every day without any difficulty is write, if possible.
Reason: "Every day" should be two words when referring to each day, and the infinitive "to write" is not necessary after "is."

Original: So I decided to write a daily diary in English.
Correction: No change needed.
Reason: This sentence is clear and correct.

Original: Of course, using DeepL.
Correction: Of course, I will be using DeepL for assistance.
Reason: "Using DeepL" is a fragment; the full sentence "I will be using DeepL for assistance" is clearer.

Original: Humble daily, grateful daily, small efforts everyday will eventually produce big results.
Correction: Humble daily efforts, grateful reflections, and small actions every day will eventually produce big results.
Reason: "Humble daily, grateful daily" needs more context to be clear. "Efforts" and "reflections" provide better clarity, and "every day" should be two words.

Original: That is what I believe.
Correction: No change needed.
Reason: This sentence is clear and correct.

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